Macmillan Learning This draft paragraph by a student writer appears in an essay about the importance of the organization Girl Scouts of America. What would be the best advice you might offer the writer to help with revision? Student paragraph The Girl Scouts are not just about cookies and camping. The organization refers to itself as a "leadership development experience," and its program reflects that (Girl Scouts). Participants earn badges in skills such as robotics, creative writing, and budgeting. Much of the program is based around getting involved in the community, raising money for charity, and volunteering for good causes. Older age groups require girls to plan and carry out their own community service project. The Boy Scouts also require scouts to complete a community service project to become Eagle Scouts. Even selling cookies teaches girls financial and entrepreneurial skills. What advice would help the writer with revision? O Place the parenthetical citation inside the quotation marks, at the end o