Task: The following e mail suffers from numerous writing faults such as dangling modifiers, over use of the passive voice and fragments. Please rewrite the e mail . Also identify what are three sentences have dangling modifiers? what eight sentences exhibit passive voice and which 3 group of words represent fragments?

To : Tyler. long

From: Janice Rivera < jrivera@ 24hourgym.com>1

Subject: Expanding your Workouts at 24 hours Gym

Cc:

BCc:

Dear Mr. long,

24 hour gym here in seattle was probably selected by you it is one of the top- rated gyms in the Northwest . Our principal goal has always been making your workouts productive . to continue to provide you with the best equipment and programs , your feedback is needed.

An outstanding program with quality equipment and excellent trainers has been provided by 24 hour Gym . However , more individual attention could be given by us to our customers if our peak usage time could be extended. You have probably noticed that attendance at the gym increases from 4pm to 8pm We would like to make better use of the time between 8pm to 11pm . if more members came later, the gym would have less crush from 4pm to 8pm .

To encourage you to stay later, security cameras for our parking area are being considered by my partner and me . Cameras for completing this questionare . Which will give us instant feedback about scheduling your workouts. By completing this questionare , your workouts and training sessions can be better planned so that can be better planned so that you enjoy exactly the equipment and trainers you prefer.

Please fill in the attached interactive questionare . Which will give us instant feedback about scheduling your workouts . By completing this questionare , your workouts and training sessions can be better planned so that you can enjoy exactly the equipment and trainers you prefer.

Cordially,