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842 New Durham Rd.
Edison, NJ 08817
June 4, 200x

Mr. Frederick M. Eadgar
Human Resources Department
Marketing and Sales Pros
1050 Avenue of the Americas
New York, NY 10036

Dear Mr. Edgar:

I would really wellcome the opportunity to work for you. I appreciated the interview yesterday for the newly-listed Position of Sales Trainee. It was really a pleasure meeting yourself and learning more about Marketing and Sales Pros, you have a fine staff and a sophisticated approach to marketing.

You are organization appears to be growing in a directional manner that parralels my interests’ and career goals. The interview with yourself and your staff yesterday confirmed my initale positive impressions of Marketing and Sales Pros and I want to reiterate my strong interest in working with and for you. My prior Retail sales experience as a sales associate with The Gap; plus my recent training in Microsoft Word and Excel would enable me to make progress steadily through your programs of training and become a productive member of your sales team in no time at all.

Again, thank-you for your kind and gracius consideration. In the event that you need any additional information from me, all you have to do is give me a jingle at (732) 598-3557.
Sincerly yours,