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In the sense of developing a wearable that could possibly generate future revenue by some form of subscription, the old marketers are correct.On the other hand, they failed to see how to make their product stand out from the already flooded market of wearable.Although their idea is good for the company, it may not be good from the consumers point of view.The company should look into a design with more appeal to their customers.Finding ways to make their product better than that of their competitors will also show that they are innovative.This will help the company rise above the others in the market and generate them more revenue.

The people in the room can be good proxies for their customers.The younger marketers could have an advantage in knowing what the competitors lack in their designs as they most likely have some type of experience using them.The older marketers would have the advantage of knowing how and when to market their product.By working as a team, they could educate each other making it beneficial for the company, consumers, and themselves.Teams are able to accomplish much more than individuals.

By conducting a questionnaire of the younger age group or target group, a better recommendation on the design of a new wearable would be beneficial for the company.By asking the correct questions, it would give them insight of what is lacking in the current market.Some things that they could ask are:

1.What do you want to be able to do with your wearable?

2.What problems have you experienced or heard of on the wearable products on the market?

3.What wearable do you like the best?Why?

4.What would your ideal wearable be like?

In order to get the best feedback, they would need to target the correct age group.They could conduct these surveys on college and high school students and even check out reviews of similar products already on the market.Making up focus groups would also be another option.By taking a little bit of time to get a good idea of what is lacking, they could design a wearable that would not only show innovation but bring in new and future customers.This would put them above their competitors and generate more revenue as well.(391)