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Opening$$&$$Introduction$$

Good$$evening$,$ladies$$and$$gentlemen$.$

My$$name$$is$$Eustace$$Osborne$,$ but you may know me better as "Benji." I am deeply proud to represent the vibrant communities of Cudjoe Head and Woodlands.$$Tonight$,$I$$stand$$before$$you$$not$$just$$as$$a$$candidate$$but$$as$$a$$passionate$$advocate$$for$$the$$ordinary$$men$$and$$women$$who$$form$$the$$backbone$$of$$our$$beloved$$Montserrat$.$ Our$$island$$is$$built$$on$$the$$strength$$of$$its$$people$,$and$$it$$is$$my$$deep$$love$$for$$this$$community$$that$$drives$$me$,$alongside$$the$$People$$s$$Democratic$$Movement$($PDM$),$to$$seek$$real$$and$$lasting$$progress$.$ Together,$$we$$can$$elevate$$Montserrat$$to$$new$$heights$.$ We$$are$$here$$to$$combine$$our$$ideas$,$values$,$and$$efforts$$to$$build$$a$$brighter$,$more$$prosperous$$future$.$

PDM$\text{'}$s$$Vision$$and$$Mandate$$

The PDM$\text{'}$s mandate is centered on three core pillars: engagement, enhancement, and empowerment. These are not just words but commitments to our people. We believe in a Montserrat where every citizen is empowered, where opportunities abound, and where every voice matter. Along with the PDM work force we have formed a strong, capable team ready to tackle the challenges we face. Our goal is to restore credibility and stability to our island, creating an inclusive and thriving community. We are committed to transparency, accountability, and fostering a government that truly represents the will of the people.

My people there are a number people coming out been very apologetic

Saying they have made mistakes in tell you to vote for the MCAP and they are sorry.

But I told you that MCAP is a virus and Alliance is a mutation do you understand what I am saying my people?

MCAP is a virus and Alliance is a mutation.

I am not here to hurt anyone feelings but I am about Montserrat first and what these people has done to you and by extension our country is unconscionable and PDM is here to correct that to make sure that you the people.. are look after.

The road maintenance network the importance of having it is a cost liability up on the motorist bus drivers and even privately owned vehicles to maintain there vehicles in an already in a tuff economy $.$

The Mcap government came into power and they met a project the A$1$project the man who is charge the hot mix have given excuse after excuses the hot mix plant is here and yet look at the conditions of your roads those this look like an individual who care about you the people yet he is coming into your homes asking you the vote for him and the MCAP team for what nothing.... More of nothing $..$ More of nothing $.$

After five years, we can see the state of our Sea Port project and the concerning delays surrounding our hospital. Has that money disappeared back to England? Everything these individuals touch seems to jinx $-$ the Geothermal, Hospital, and Seaport projects have all suffered under their watch.

These projects were expected to bring substantial investment, create jobs, and improve infrastructure, which are critical for the island's growth and development. However, the perceived mismanagement and lack of progress on these projects have led to skepticism among the public. When resources are not used effectively, it not only stalls economic growth but also erodes public trust in leadership.

The incoming PDM party plans to address the economic implications of stalled projects by prioritizing transparency and accountability in project management. We will conduct thorough assessments of ongoing initiatives like the Sea Port, Hospital, and Geothermal projects to identify issues and implement corrective actions. By fostering partnerships with local businesses and stakeholders, the PDM aims to stimulate job creation and economic growth.

By engaging citizens in the decision$-$making process, the PDM seeks to empower the community and ensure that every voice is heard, ultimately working towards a more prosperous and stable future for Montserrat.

A Call to Action and Conclusion

We are not merely making promises; we are dedicated to taking decisive action. Our vision for Montserrat is