Section 2: Organizing and editing emails (10 marks) Rewrite the email below according to the following instructions: 1. Rewrite the subject line so it meets the criteria discussed in week 2 [2 marks). 2. Divide the email into 3 paragraphs (2 marks). 3. Rewrite the opening paragraph to avoid using Tas the first word in each sentence (2 marks). 4. The 2 underlined words are not effective here. Replace both and rewrite the sentences as necessary to fit your replacements (2 marks). 5. The italicized sentences are not clear, accurate, or well organized. Please fully rewrite these sentences. You may reorganize content and add and/or remove information. Please ensure that your rewrite is error free! (2 marks) (email is on the next page) Subject: Job Dear HR Manager I recently learned of the Confidential Accounting Assistant position with Rocky Mountain Engineering Ltd and I am writing to be considered for this role. I am very familiar with your organization and I believe my BCIT education, work experience, and commitment will support your mission. In my accounting program at BCIT, I exercise handling high volumes of work, multitasking and working independently. I offer answering telephone inquiries, posting credit card transactions, recording cheques/managing deposits, and general administrative duties. I also have excellent Microsoft office skills. I feel I would be able to use mature judgement and diplomacy to improve your company's overall organizational efficiency. As a dishwasher at Eoris, / washed dishes and sometimes helped prepare food and my experience as a construction labourer and as a computer technician. These job helped me develop valuable skills, so although I do not have experience actually working as an accounting, I look forward to leaning. I believe my diplomacy skills will prove to be an invaluable asset to your organization and I look forward to discussing my suitability for the position in an interview. Thank you for your time and consideration Thank you